Negotiation And Deals
Salary Negotiation Script Builder for Offers
Prepares negotiation talking points that increase compensation offers.
1. Offer Analysis
- Ask the user about the job offer—role, company, base salary, bonus, equity, benefits, and start date.
- Example: "What's the full offer—base salary, bonus structure, equity/stock options, benefits (PTO, insurance, 401k), and when do they want you to start?"
- Ask the user about market rates for this role—what's typical for this position, level, and location?
- Example: "What's the market rate based on research (Glassdoor, Levels.fyi, etc.)—salary range for your role, experience level, and location?"
- Ask the user about their expectations and priorities—what do you want (ideal vs. minimum), and what matters most (cash, equity, flexibility)?
- Example: "What's your target compensation, walk-away minimum, and priorities—higher base, more equity, better title, remote flexibility?"
- Ask the user about your leverage—competing offers, unique skills, their urgency to fill role, or demand for your expertise.
- Example: "What's your leverage—other offers, rare skills, are they desperate to fill this, or high demand for your background?"
2. Research & Preparation
Market Data Collection:
- Salary.com, Glassdoor, Payscale for role benchmarks
- Levels.fyi for tech comp (especially equity)
- Industry reports and surveys
- Network contacts in similar roles
Total Compensation Calculator: Don't just focus on base—calculate full package:
Base Salary: $X Bonus (at target): $Y Equity (vesting schedule, current valuation): $Z over 4 years = $Z/4 per year Benefits value: Health insurance ($X), 401k match ($Y), PTO ($Z equivalent) Perks: Remote work (save commute $), learning budget, etc.
Total Annual Comp: Base + Bonus + (Equity/4) + Benefits = $___
Competing Offer Comparison: If you have multiple offers, create side-by-side: | Component | Company A | Company B | Company C | |-----------|-----------|-----------|-----------| | Base | $X | $Y | $Z | | Bonus | % | % | % | | Equity | Value | Value | Value | | Total Comp | $** | $** | $__ | | Work-Life | Rating | Rating | Rating |
3. Negotiation Strategy
Anchoring Your Ask:
- Start higher than target (but reasonable)
- Gives room to "meet in the middle"
- Backed by market data, not arbitrary
Justification Framework: Your ask should be based on:
- Market data: "Based on [source], the range for this role is $X-$Y"
- Your value: "Given my [experience/skills/track record], I'm at the higher end"
- Competing offers: "I have an offer for $Z from [company/industry]"
- Total comp vs. just salary: "When I look at the full package..."
What to Negotiate:
Beyond Base Salary:
- Sign-on bonus (one-time cash to make up gap)
- Performance bonus target (increase from X% to Y%)
- Equity grants (more RSUs/options)
- Accelerated vesting or refresh grants
- Title/level (affects long-term earnings)
- Remote work flexibility
- Additional PTO days
- Professional development budget
- Relocation assistance
- Earlier performance review (path to raise sooner)
Low-Cost Asks: Things that cost company little but valuable to you:
- Flexible hours or remote days
- Conference/training budget
- Home office stipend
- Commuter benefits
- Latest equipment/tech
4. Negotiation Scripts
Initial Response to Offer:
"Thank you so much for the offer—I'm excited about the opportunity to join [Company] and contribute to [specific team/initiative].
I'd like to take a day or two to review the full package and get back to you with any questions. When would be a good time to discuss?"
[Don't accept immediately—always review and negotiate]
Opening Your Negotiation:
"I'm really excited about this role and joining the team. I've reviewed the offer carefully, and while I'm thrilled about the opportunity, I was hoping we could discuss the compensation package.
Based on my research into market rates for [role] in [location], combined with my [X years experience / specific skills / track record of results], I was expecting something closer to $[higher amount].
Is there flexibility to get closer to $[target], or can we explore adjustments to [bonus/equity/other components]?"
If They Ask for Your Expectations Early:
"That's a fair question. Before I share a number, I want to make sure I fully understand the role, scope, and expectations. Can you tell me more about [responsibilities, team structure, success metrics]?
[After learning more]
Based on what you've shared and my research into market rates, I'd be looking for total compensation in the range of $[X-Y]. Does that align with the budget for this role?"
If Offer is Below Market:
"I really appreciate the offer. I want to be transparent—based on market data from [sources] and my [experience level/skills], roles like this typically range from $[X-Y]. The offer of $[amount] is below that range.
I'm very interested in this opportunity, but to make it work, I'd need to see the base closer to $[target] or adjust other components like [bonus/equity/title].
Is there room to get closer to market rates?"
If They Say Budget is Fixed:
"I understand there are budget constraints. A few alternatives to consider:
1. Could we increase the [bonus target/equity grant] to bring total comp closer to $[target]?
2. Would a [sign-on bonus] be possible to bridge the gap in year one?
3. Could we schedule a performance review in [6 months] with a path to $[target] if I hit [specific goals]?
Which of these might be feasible?"
If You Have Competing Offer:
"I want to be transparent—I have another offer for $[amount] from [industry/type of company]. While I'm more excited about this opportunity because of [specific reasons], the compensation gap makes it difficult.
If we could get closer to $[amount], I'm ready to accept today. Is that possible?"
When Presenting Multiple Requests:
"I'd love to discuss a few components of the package:
1. Base salary: Could we move from $[offer] to $[target]?
2. Equity: An additional [X] RSUs would align with market comp
3. [Other ask]: [Justification]
I'm flexible on how we get there—what matters most is the total package feeling competitive. What do you think is possible?"
Accepting the Revised Offer:
"Thank you for working with me on this. The revised package of $[amount] base + [other components] works great.
I'm excited to accept and get started. What are the next steps?"
[Get revised offer in writing before accepting]
If They Won't Budge:
"I appreciate you exploring options with me. The offer of $[amount] is below what I need to make this move right now.
If circumstances change or budget opens up, I'd love to revisit this conversation. I'll keep [Company] top of mind for future opportunities.
Thank you for your time and consideration."
[Sometimes walking away brings them back with a better offer]
5. Negotiation Mistakes to Avoid
Don't:
- ✗ Accept first offer without negotiating
- ✗ Lie about competing offers (they may ask for proof)
- ✗ Make ultimatums unless prepared to walk
- ✗ Negotiate over email (phone or video is better for nuance)
- ✗ Focus only on salary (miss other valuable components)
- ✗ Be apologetic or overly deferential
- ✗ Negotiate after you've already accepted
- ✗ Burn bridges if you decline
Do:
- ✓ Research thoroughly before negotiating
- ✓ Express enthusiasm while negotiating
- ✓ Anchor high but reasonable
- ✓ Use data to back up your ask
- ✓ Be willing to walk if lowballed
- ✓ Get everything in writing
- ✓ Stay professional and collaborative
- ✓ Thank them regardless of outcome
6. Special Scenarios
Internal Promotion:
- Research external market rates (not just internal bands)
- Justify based on expanded responsibilities
- Reference internal equity (what others at that level make)
Switching Industries:
- Acknowledge if moving to higher/lower paying industry
- Emphasize transferable skills and value you bring
- Use market data for target industry, not current
Early Career:
- Harder to negotiate big jumps, but still worthwhile
- Focus on title, growth opportunities, learning budget
- Ask for earlier review cycle (6 months vs. annual)
Executive Level:
- Equity and bonus often larger components than base
- Negotiate severance terms, change of control provisions
- Consider total package over 3-5 year horizon
7. Deliverables
Compensation Analysis:
- Market research summary with sources
- Total comp calculator (offer vs. market vs. target)
- Competing offer comparison (if applicable)
Negotiation Script:
- Opening statement
- Requests with justifications
- Response to pushback
- Acceptance or decline language
Preparation Worksheet:
- Your leverage points
- Their likely constraints
- Creative solutions beyond base salary
- Walk-away criteria
Post-Negotiation Checklist:
- Get revised offer in writing
- Review employment agreement
- Clarify start date, logistics
- Confirm all verbal promises are documented
Present complete salary negotiation framework with market analysis, strategic approach, scripted responses for all scenarios, and confidence-building preparation to maximize compensation offers.